leavings
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Hi everyone,
here's the second post-worthy mix from my new album. It's called Anne-Marie, about trying to resist the allure of a girl I met at a show. I'd really appreciate feedback on both the arrangement and mix. I'd especially like to know if you think the arrangement needs anything more, and if so, what?
You can download the attachment, or if you prefer streaming audio go to reverbnation.com/thepoemadept. I posted the lyrics below for those of you who want them. Thanks in advance for your suggestions!
Cheers,
leavings
Anne-Marie
I was on stage at the Owl and Thistle, picking with The Boys
Hollerin’ Whiskey in the Jar when she walked in
The head of every man in the bar swiveled like a toy
To the table where she sat down with all her friends
This guitar and I have been around, met many girls in many towns
And I’ve been true to the one heart given to me
But as the chorus boomed and we locked eyes, and she broke into that piercing smile
I knew how deep in trouble I was bound to be
Anne-Marie, cut from the cloth of a fantasy
But I got a woman, she’s everything I need
We’re flirting on the set breaks, spurred by the alcohol
And we punch each other’s numbers into our phones
Then the show is over and the lights are on, and they’re shouting out last call
And the night’s too old for a girl to be walking alone
Well a man can hold the waters back only so long before the dam will crack
And temptation finds a way to overflow
In the later days of retrospect, I'd bite my lip and curse my breath
For not calling her a cab and getting myself home
Anne-Marie, cut from the cloth of a fantasy
But I got a woman, she’s everything I need
Anne-Marie, the prettiest jewel I’ve ever seen
But I got a woman, she’s everything to me
I’m at the door to her apartment with my hand beneath her dress
And she’s asking if I’d like to come inside
She throws her jacket on the floor and starts taking off the rest
Oh lord I’ve got a woman and I’m treating her wrong tonight
Anne-Marie, cut from the cloth of a fantasy
But I got a woman, she’s everything I need
Anne-Marie, pulling me into her on the sheets
But I got a woman, she’s everything to me
here's the second post-worthy mix from my new album. It's called Anne-Marie, about trying to resist the allure of a girl I met at a show. I'd really appreciate feedback on both the arrangement and mix. I'd especially like to know if you think the arrangement needs anything more, and if so, what?
You can download the attachment, or if you prefer streaming audio go to reverbnation.com/thepoemadept. I posted the lyrics below for those of you who want them. Thanks in advance for your suggestions!
Cheers,
leavings
Anne-Marie
I was on stage at the Owl and Thistle, picking with The Boys
Hollerin’ Whiskey in the Jar when she walked in
The head of every man in the bar swiveled like a toy
To the table where she sat down with all her friends
This guitar and I have been around, met many girls in many towns
And I’ve been true to the one heart given to me
But as the chorus boomed and we locked eyes, and she broke into that piercing smile
I knew how deep in trouble I was bound to be
Anne-Marie, cut from the cloth of a fantasy
But I got a woman, she’s everything I need
We’re flirting on the set breaks, spurred by the alcohol
And we punch each other’s numbers into our phones
Then the show is over and the lights are on, and they’re shouting out last call
And the night’s too old for a girl to be walking alone
Well a man can hold the waters back only so long before the dam will crack
And temptation finds a way to overflow
In the later days of retrospect, I'd bite my lip and curse my breath
For not calling her a cab and getting myself home
Anne-Marie, cut from the cloth of a fantasy
But I got a woman, she’s everything I need
Anne-Marie, the prettiest jewel I’ve ever seen
But I got a woman, she’s everything to me
I’m at the door to her apartment with my hand beneath her dress
And she’s asking if I’d like to come inside
She throws her jacket on the floor and starts taking off the rest
Oh lord I’ve got a woman and I’m treating her wrong tonight
Anne-Marie, cut from the cloth of a fantasy
But I got a woman, she’s everything I need
Anne-Marie, pulling me into her on the sheets
But I got a woman, she’s everything to me