Jagular
Active member
Hey guys. I posted a version of this song here a few months back. Since then, it has been rewritten in a co-write with Crawdad, who frequents the mp3 clinic. A couple of you who cross over may have heard this song already. I started recording it myself. These are just scratch tracks (first cuts on all tracks) so I can start building the song. But I figured they are good enough to share with you guys for songwriting purposes.
I would love to hear any comments or suggestions.
Thanks
http://mywebpages.comcast.net/Jagular/songs/
(I'll put a link up to NWR later, can't access it from work)
Crawdad's version is more finished and pretty much the direction I will be taking this recording (except he plays a lot better than I do). If you want to hear Crawdad's version check here (it's really good). I think it's called river3 there:
http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/?aid=1522/singles.shtml
Where The River Flows
c 2003 John Scott & Al Carmichael
Verse
Into the fog we launched our boat
Trying to beat the sun
To our favorite fishin' hole
With the motor's start the race was on
With so many turns to slow our way
The sun would claim our spot that day
Chorus
So I said, Grandpa, can you tell me wy the river flows
To the East and then back West when South is where we need to go
He said, you might make better time
If you could travel that straight line
But you'll never find out all life has to show
If you don't follow where the river flows
Verse
She might have months, a year or two
So the doctor said
But I loved Amy hear and soul
So on that river bank we wed
My friends all warned me of the pain
And how my love would end in vain
Chorus
So I said, I just gotta follow where the river flows
Where it's bound to lead me now, there is just one way to know
I might have a simpler life
If I let this chance pass by
But I'll never find out all life has to show
If I don't follow where the river flows
Bridge
So she took my hand and we went roung that bend
In in our time we discovered love tha knows no end
I saw it in her blue eyes every day
Even as she slowly slipped away
Verse
Our daughter has her mother's eyes
And such a pretty face
She's too young to realize
How life's led us to this place
Right now she just has one wish
She just wants to catch a fish
Chorus
And she says, Daddy, can you tell me why the river flows
To the East and then back West when South is where we need to go
I say, you might make better time
If you could travel that straight line
But you'll never find out all life has to show
If you don't follow where the river flows
Tag
If you don't follow where the river flows
I would love to hear any comments or suggestions.
Thanks
http://mywebpages.comcast.net/Jagular/songs/
(I'll put a link up to NWR later, can't access it from work)
Crawdad's version is more finished and pretty much the direction I will be taking this recording (except he plays a lot better than I do). If you want to hear Crawdad's version check here (it's really good). I think it's called river3 there:
http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/?aid=1522/singles.shtml
Where The River Flows
c 2003 John Scott & Al Carmichael
Verse
Into the fog we launched our boat
Trying to beat the sun
To our favorite fishin' hole
With the motor's start the race was on
With so many turns to slow our way
The sun would claim our spot that day
Chorus
So I said, Grandpa, can you tell me wy the river flows
To the East and then back West when South is where we need to go
He said, you might make better time
If you could travel that straight line
But you'll never find out all life has to show
If you don't follow where the river flows
Verse
She might have months, a year or two
So the doctor said
But I loved Amy hear and soul
So on that river bank we wed
My friends all warned me of the pain
And how my love would end in vain
Chorus
So I said, I just gotta follow where the river flows
Where it's bound to lead me now, there is just one way to know
I might have a simpler life
If I let this chance pass by
But I'll never find out all life has to show
If I don't follow where the river flows
Bridge
So she took my hand and we went roung that bend
In in our time we discovered love tha knows no end
I saw it in her blue eyes every day
Even as she slowly slipped away
Verse
Our daughter has her mother's eyes
And such a pretty face
She's too young to realize
How life's led us to this place
Right now she just has one wish
She just wants to catch a fish
Chorus
And she says, Daddy, can you tell me why the river flows
To the East and then back West when South is where we need to go
I say, you might make better time
If you could travel that straight line
But you'll never find out all life has to show
If you don't follow where the river flows
Tag
If you don't follow where the river flows