some sort of a song"

  • Thread starter Thread starter James Allen
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Hi Jim,
Needs bass dude...
Drums sound wicked canned...ya know?
Good vox though...maybe a tad less verb....
You should try panning the guit as well...
seems like everything is straight up the middle...


Ya oughta shop it in Nashville..

Good luck,
Joe
 
cya

Hey James,
You dirty dog. You done it again. The wifey woke me up this morning looking for some damn panty hose. Great tune dude.

Do you want to know what "cya" is?

"Carry Yo Ass" some where and make a record. IMO, you got some great country stuff going on.

dtb
 
I agree with Joe, in that it could use a bass, or at least a stronger bass line on the rhthym guitar.

To tell ya the truth, I think the canned drums do not work here. They are also way too prominent in the mix. I would suggest a different, sharper sound on the accented beat also.

Vocal has a nice quality but has too much reverb; I don't think anyone other than Johnny Cash can get away with that much 'verb. Also kind of muddy; you might want to play (unplay?)with the eq a bit.
 
thanks guys!

Betty L. Johnson wrote this song...and had a smoother more "blusey" sound....we got to playing around with it and got a little carried away LOL! we didn't spend much time on the mix...
dtb! i tried really hard to stay away! really i did! but these darn shorts just ain't workin like the pantyhose"
 
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