so far my very best mix, please critique

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jerberson12 said:
hope you like the mix. just a short clip, cant wrap up the whole thing im not motivated to do it :(

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/jerbersonmusic.htm
click on "Short Clip"
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I dunno. I kind of like the mix of the other song on your site better. :30 is not enough to really evaluate, but it sounds a little muddy to me, for lack of a better term. Good performances, though.
 
That was much better. Good mix. I think the vocal could be a bit louder and perhaps a little less "processed." Other than that, strong work.
 
The mp3 encoding isn't very good, but it sound like you were a little heavy handed on the auto-tune, no?
 
What gives with the snare when it picks up? Sounds uber-sound replaced. There's this ultra low thump and reverb tail I'm not digging.

Vocals need to come foreward a bit more. That's probably why people consider it to sound processed.

Cymbals a bit too present. Same with high hat. Take 'em down a hair.

Other than that, sounds phenomenal.
 
ok this is what i did

I lowered the high ends and boost up 2KHZ on all the distortion tracks
Tamed down the Hats and cymbals
Add another distortion tracks total of 5.
Lowered the snare.
Boost up vocals
Lowered the autotune rate for vocals.

check the song again thanks
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/jerbersonmusic.htm
click on "short clip"

anyway thanks for the feedbacks guys, thats a lot of help.
anyway the purpose that i only recorded a short song its because i wanna concentrate practicing on the mix and mastering. even the lyrics doesnt make any sense :D
 
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