Seventeen (new online collab)

[D_Vincent]

Another online collab...people involved in collab are myself,Tricia and Smurf.

I composed song,played guitar,wrote lyrics,vocal melody and did the mix...Tricia worte lyrics,vocal melody and sang vocals...Smurf did the bass and drums.

There are a few mistakes in the song here and there guitar wise however i figuered why bother being to fussy since its a home recording and all.

Seventeen
http://travtale.dmusic.com/

 

[Bulls Hit]

Pretty cool pop song. Nice hook ..kudos. Song grew on me as I listened. The only think that sounded out of place was one of the guitars now & then was a bit brash...very cool tunage, I like it a lot

 

[Aled_King]

I like it. It's a good catchy song.

The Verse I like in particular, there is something really nice and simple about it. Lyrics are okay. A bit too obvious I think, but they kinda fit with the song being about what it's like to be 17.

Overall good work!

 

[D_Vincent]

Thanks for the comments...I did the mix so the mix is not very good.

I just redid the mix to make guitars sound better and to clean up the bassy parts as well...basically just learned some new ways of mixing drums,bass and guitar yesterday because I was having a hard time mixing them...The mix still isnt great however its a bit better than before.

Seventeen new Mix
http://travtale.dmusic.com/