Second Time Around (song title) - Feedback appreciated

[daddio307]

One more from the 80's. Didn't have my bass at this time so I had to use my Casio CZ101 to handle the chore. Not much processing involved, but It's one of my favorite self-penned songs. Please let me know what you think. Thanks for listening.

http://donloe.bandcamp.com/track/second-time-around

 

[ido1957]

Nice pop tune - well crafted. I like the vocals a lot - what's your vocal chain? The bassline or whatever is pretty repetitive. The guitar is rather thin. There's really no low bass. So the vocals are good but the intruments are not doing it for me.

 

[daddio307]

Just recorded it in my dining room with a Tascam PortaII Ministudio cassette recorder. Yamaha RX11 drum machine (no volume/pressure sensitive pads) and my acoustic guitar mic-ed. I might have used my Midiverb for the vocals but didn't have any other sort of compression or processing tools. Carvin condenser mic for the vocals. I'm pretty sure that's it. Like I said, the tiny Casio synth was it for the bass line and at the time I didn't know how to coax a deeper sound out of it. I know the recording is rather primitive, but I am rather fond of the song. Thanks for the comments.