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[Mart[1001]]

I love strings with a dance tempo. That was the idea behind this tune. Not sure what else I can say about this track really, but would love some feedback on the mix though guys.

As my tunes tend to be a bit long(especially my intro's), I decided to post a shortened version...but those of you with my patience, can listen to the full version if you like.

Shortened(Radio edit)

Full version

Thanks in advance guys...

Mart.

 

[jameskuht]

Mart,

The very first chord sounds like the start of 'Prelude' by pendulum!!!

I do like the track, very nice listening, and to my inexperienced ears nothing particularly stands out to me as needing correcting.

If I'm being critical, when the guitar comes in at 0:24 (I listened to the radio version), it sounds a bit too loud and a little too crisp (listen too the last note plated around 0:36 sounds like its accidently damped by a stray finger) compared to the strings.

Also the chord played by the synth that starts the main part of the song (0:43) sounds like it clashs when the strings come back in.

Finally the piano sounds good, but I would maybe use a more airy (slightly delayed and reverby piano sound) to add a little more atmosphere?

I like the dynamic change at 2:14 and building the sound back up with strings.

Just a few opinions, sorry I can't really offer any advice with anything technical!

James