savior the sinner

[sane solution]

i am new here and this is one of my first recordings. im just looking for some feedback. so please let me know what you think. thanks

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5749357&q=hi

 

[gullyjewelz]

good track. too long of a build up . . . get 2 rappin sooner! the flow is ok. the voice is . . . too "soft" 4 my likin . . . too similar to "talkin" rather than spittin . . . but thats just my 2 cents . . . im sure others will throw some feedback ur way as well . . .