Rolling this one into the clinic

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DevilizhStylez

I'm Bored
New tune "As I Fall"

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"As I Fall"

Alone, Watching the world From atop
Seeing it run, Nothing to make it stop
Feeling so cold for no reason at all
Watching myself as I,
Watching myself as I fall.----Forget about

Flying, watching you from up atop
Seeing you run, Trying to make you stop
Feeling so cold, all your fault
Feeling so alone, all your fault
Watching myself as I,
Watching myself as I fall.----Forget about!

Chorus:

|Why did you run away?
|Leaving me to fade away
|Nothing could make you stay
|For even one, more, day! Drop!
X's-2

(Solo)
Forget it all

Dying, Watching my world Fall apart
Seeing you Run, Nothing to make you stop
Feeling so cold for no reason at all
Feeling so alone, it's all Your fault
Watching myself, as I fall.----Regret it all.
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These lyrics were writen by a friend of mine, and I had
already had the music done. And when I read his lyrics I
thought oh shit these would fit right into this project!
So I gave it a shot. All I did was add a verse and aranged
it to fit just right, I'm not to happy with how the chorus sounds
vocally but I really tried, I just aint got the vocal skills to make it
like I hear it in my head. But I have been mic'ing my guitars here
lately instead of direct so any comments are greatly appreciated!
Still using the damn drum machine though, but I did purchace a
drum set so I am building it up and trying to prepare it for some
recording, way expensive!! :-(
What a hellish hobby!!

The lyrics are pretty much writen By my Friend Josh C.
And though I dont usually try to do any relationship kinda tunes
with my style of music, when I read these I knew where he was
coming from since I guess allot of us have kinda been through
the same kinda shit. Fuckin women can really twist your damn
mind sometimes!!

Happy hollidays By the way!! And thanks!
 
Like this metal styling, some heavy stuff.. good guitars captured there. You need to bring the bass more prominent into the mix

The guitar chops are very cool, like your writing style. The vox could come up some more in the mix, they sound a little in the background.

Good tones on the lead, guitar chops are tight. It somewhat reminds me somewhat of early White Zombie.



and don't forget to review at least two other threads.. feedback is what makes the clinic run
 
Khompewtur said:
Like this metal styling, some heavy stuff.. good guitars captured there. You need to bring the bass more prominent into the mix

The guitar chops are very cool, like your writing style. The vox could come up some more in the mix, they sound a little in the background.

Good tones on the lead, guitar chops are tight. It somewhat reminds me somewhat of early White Zombie.



and don't forget to review at least two other threads.. feedback is what makes the clinic run
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Thanks for the feedback, glad you liked it. I used to listen to allot of older white zombie. Well I still do sometimes, I guess that would mean that it's an influence in a way?
 
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