Okay, I had to listen to this at a VERY low volume because the wife and baby are asleep, but here's some observations...
The song itself is pretty cool, but there were timing problems during the tempo-changes.
I'm sure you can hear it... it's obvious.
The drums sound like mud.... the snare was too loud, the cymbals were too soft and the bass drum sounds like a mud-thud.
The bass guitar lost alot of it's definition during the fast-jam parts. You should've put more mid-punch on the bass and cut the lows (50 - 100 Hz range) just a bit. More reverb on the bass would be nice, too.
The second vocal is too loud.
Was it your intent to have it at the same level as the lead vocal?
It would've sounded better if it was sung in "harmony" rather than the exact same thing the lead vocal is doing, and mixed at a lower level... just enough to compliment the lead vocal and sweeten up the mix.
Also, you need a better vocal mic.
The guitars sound very POD-like.
The slide-lead part lacks bite and should've been louder in the mix during the solo.
I didn't like the "cat screeching" sound when the bass stopped playing... it's annoying and unneccessary.
The overall mix itself seems over-compressed.
Other than that... I LIKED IT!!!
Just my humble opinion... YMMV.
