An improvement but still some issues....
The stereo image leans heavily to the right, because you panned rhy gtrs over there... I still think you'd be better off with a stereo spread on them instead of straight panning....
Vocal is louder, but very woolly, so it sounds murky and indistinct...
Also, there is no "dimension" to any of your mix elements, all the tracks exist on the same plane and space....
You could use some ambience on there... and ambience doesn't mean gobs of reverb.... short delays, small ambient room sounds will give your mix some depth.............
Drum sounds are sitting better but also need a "room" around them (ie, space)!