Sounds good man. The first mix sounded a little weak, but the second mix sounds like it has more lo end and Guitars also i think. The overall volume sounds louder aswell.
Nice work.
Second one is a lot better. When I first heard it.. I wanted to slay dragons or something.
She sounds kinda like Geddy Lee at points.
I think the bass could use more compression and a bit more balls. It sounds pretty balanced in the low end right now, though. I don't know how much you'd want to fuck with that. I may just be a fan of heavily compressed bass, though.
There's an awful lot to like here! Great performances all around. And I really like the sound of this recording. There is a hint of Vapor Trails in there, and I like that record.
The bass sounded better for sure the second time around--I have a bit of a bass guitar bias and would like to hear a little more of it, but on the other hand I think that this particular song doesn't call for it.
Good job!