Recorded this in my parents' basement... i'm so alone... comments?

  • Thread starter Thread starter xela526
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the vocals lack emotion - it reminds me of this, but it needs to be developed a lot - great start for a 17 year old.
Maybe try softening the vocals up a bit and making a little more intimate - it just needs more human presence...
the words seem very meaningful but the vocals do not convey it
not trying to discourage, and I certainly do not make music like that and wouldn't even try - my voice is a mess and I couldn't sing anything like that if i wanted to - but your voice is pretty good you just need to develop more of "you" in it

 
The problem is the vocals all sound like the same 5 or 6 notes. The chords are all the same. It's a bit boring and monotonous.
You have a decent voice and excellent chops but you need to develop some more variety in your melody and it will be more interesting.
So keep working on your songwriting. Your lyrics are fine and your playing is great. Your recording is fine, I see no real issues there.
 
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