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SKYflyer
New member
i listened to it, and nothing really stuck out to me that was bad or needed changing, so i guess that's a good sign. Sorry i cant think of anything to suggest to you, but i liked the song!
Dogman
Unkle Ticklefingers
Oh, man, that sounds so BAD..... 
Ok, I had to bash ya.
Really, nice tune. Nice playing. Very cool. I like the way it builds. Good singing. Fits the feel of the tune well. Again, nice guitar. Stay with the song very well throughout. Song has a great feel. Wish I had more, but I like it. I wouldn't change a thing if it were mine.
Nice.
Ed
Ok, I had to bash ya.
Really, nice tune. Nice playing. Very cool. I like the way it builds. Good singing. Fits the feel of the tune well. Again, nice guitar. Stay with the song very well throughout. Song has a great feel. Wish I had more, but I like it. I wouldn't change a thing if it were mine.
Nice.
Ed
Herm
Well-known member
The kick is all wrong. Its played to much and in the wrong places. Other than that everythings sounds fine
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Sampler
New member
Really awesome song...my only suggestion would be to bring the vocal forward in the mix. Other than that, really nice work!
hueseph
New member
Thanks all. I'm unworthy. Truly. I've listened to some other works here. Thanks again.