quest of full sound2

[Erockrazor]

Okay I recorded this song today , trying to utilize some suggestions I have received. I like the sound I got in this song more than any other song I think. I feel pretty good about it. Please give it a listen and give me any constructive criticism you desire. Heck , criticize me uncontructively. I dont care as long as its feedback.

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The song is " Quite Quiet ". Give it a listen please! Thank you

 

[rayc]

You need to rais ethe vocal level at the intro & a few other times. there's a fine line between having to listen & having to concentrate too hard to hear what's being said through the lyric.
The backing vocals don't quite work for me - too close but not close enough to be a doubling. Either some space, a shift to harmony instead of unison, or a drop in level is needed.
All that aside - good song, well performed & recorded.

 

[danny.guitar]

The only thing I'd change is raise the vocals a bit.

Guitars sound good, great playing

 

[Erockrazor]

I've opted to redo the first verse and I agree on raising the vocals. I think my initial instinct with the vocals is to make them lower. I feel like i might naturally be more timid since they are my own vocals. I'm gonna redo the first verse and annunciate my words better , It has too much of an airy whispered sound to me .

Everyones suggestions worked pretty well. I like the guitar sound I got and while i was at it I feel like i developed a way so that my friend and I can actually record a few more songs without busting our chops so hard. Maybe we'll be able to make a demo soon. Thanks for the comments , maybe ill post the new one up tomorrow and fiddle with the vocals a bit more.

 

[Erockrazor]

Okay I redid the first verse and changed the levels of the vocals. If anyone could give " Quite Quiet " a listen and give me feedback , it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks alot!