Quality Test!!!!! Pro Ears PLZ COME IN!!!!

[i:.M.B.:i]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=87644
Listen to the song "MY ANGELS" in which I made for my kids

I just need to know if this is cool for an overall QUALITY sounding track im trying to get my stuff as close to pro as i can to quickly start shipping my demo's.....

Gear:

Rode NT1 - Microphone
Aardvark Direct Pro 24/96 - soundcard and pre-amp
Compaq Presario - a fairly new model i bought it a couple months ago

Software:

Adobe Audition 1.5 - Used for recording,overall volume mixing,panning,my h,m,l eq'ing,it's edit view mode,and also to mixdown

Nomad Factory Blue Tubes (VST Plug in): used for compression (on vocals and the overall song),limiting (only on my vocals),and stereo imaging (on the overall song)

Waves Gold And Diamond Bundle (DX Plug in): used for de-essing (on vocals),REQ (on the overall song),and also the L2 (on the overall song)

Aprecciate all feedback pro or con..........

 

[The Axis]

I think I detect a little digital distortion at times, as if the mix was a little too loud and there are some digital "overs". It could be somewhere in my computer also, though. I listened to the Hi-Fi download version.

Otherwise: Balance, composition, etc....all very professional. It could be a hit !
I don't really like rap and hip-hop, so it wasn't really the type of music that grabs me, but it seemed like a very professional composition and good balance, etc.