Punch Drunk

[MessianicDreams]

heya,

ok well this is my latest and (possibly) greatest song so far. It was inspired by my relationship with my current girlfriend, during what most people would call a "down period". so tell me what you think of it...the chords are kinda strange, i was just screwing around and found this chord which sounded cool IMHO...

Punch Drunk

You walk away from me
You walk towards your friends
You say you want to be free
And i pray this ain't the end
[Repeat]

Chorus:
Yea i'm punch drunk
Sailin' thru this lifestyle
Wlll i'm punch drunk
and it ain't too fun...no

WEll i'm so sorry my baby
Because you dont want to hear this
Won't you stay a while with me
Stay for one last kiss
[Repeat with slight variations]

Chorus:
Yea i'm punch drunk
i'm sailing thru this lifestyle
WEll i'm punch drunk
Trippin' for a while....

WEll i'm so sorry my baby...
well i'm so sorry my baby...




if you want to hear a recording version of it, just to give you and idea...

www.nowhereradio.com/messianicdreams/singles

can't wait to hear what you guys think...

enjoy!

MD

 

[NEB]

I think you might have ripped off Uncle Tupelo with the title.

 

[MessianicDreams]

I think you might have ripped off Uncle Tupelo with the title.

oh yea?? damn...i've never even heard of this Uncle Tupelo guy...if this is the case, it was purely unintentional, trust me i guess it doesnt matter all that much...unless i ripped the whole song off this guy...nah i doubt that very much heh

thanks anyways

MD