Psycho Killer Retracked

[zero00]

Hello everyone, i just retracked the song Psycho Killer, i took down the Drums compression, and made a different vocal melody in the verses and bridge. The Chorus is the same (i like it ). I hope this is better than the last one.

Thanks guys for hearing

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[VomitHatSteve]

Do you still have the original around for comparison?

It sounds pretty good, though the last chord in the new progression for the verses sounds a little weird.

 

[kcearl]

agreed with the chord...but you get used to it as the song goes on, just the first time seems a little awkward

Id bring the vocals up just a little...and the snare get a little lost during the chorus


good job though

 

[zero00]

Hello to all... i deleted the old version cause i didn't like the verses... sorry, i didn't thought about comparing, i said "hey, this is better" and deleted the old one.

Mmm, don't know what could be the problem in the verses, i tune my voice with the song's key (Bm)...

I'll fix the snare this weekend...

Thanks

 

[joeym]

Cute song, sounds pretty good. Yeah, the snare needs EQing better.
I would have had the guitar in the verse just chug-chugging along with the rythm instead of playing full chords, just to build a climax before bridge and chorus, but that's just my 2 cents.....

Joey

 

[VomitHatSteve]

Mmm, don't know what could be the problem in the verses, i tune my voice with the song's key (Bm)...

It's not that it's out of tune; it's just that you picked an unusual chord.

 

[zero00]

Cute song, sounds pretty good. Yeah, the snare needs EQing better.
I would have had the guitar in the verse just chug-chugging along with the rythm instead of playing full chords, just to build a climax before bridge and chorus, but that's just my 2 cents.....

Joey

Thanks Joeym, thanks for hearing, i noticed that this is not your style and you take the time to hear it anyway... i never heard the word "chug-chugging" but i understood it perfectly hahaha but, don't know... i'll play it and see what happens.
About the snare... roger that... i'll check it on the weekend. It's a little down in the chorus.

It's not that it's out of tune; it's just that you picked an unusual chord.

Glup... The chords of the last part are D, A and G... all majors, could be that? Maybe if ends with a Bm could fix the strange chord thing... i'll check it.

Thanks guys

 

[JonPaulP]

Good song.