rayc
retroreprobate
With a little help from denizens of the deep within the MP3 Clinic this song has taken a quantum leap forward:
Greg added the superb drum track;
Gerry added a classic lead track &
Joey has created & added a brilliant melody to interpret the lyric.
This is an experimental mix & has excessive 'essing" on it as a result of reverb & is NOT an artifact the vocal tracks themselves.
Gerry wants to retrack for more bite in his tone & there is a little glassiness in the OH's of the drum track - again due to my adding reverb.
All will be dealt with soon,
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=3T6Q0OQ7
Apart from the stated issues is there anything else I need to address?
Here is the re upped by KC link:
Thank you sir!
New Mix (26/10/10 EDST AUS)
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=PH1ULZU0
Here's the lyric:
The Master’s Gone Away.
The sheets were grey,
Where the body had lain,
And the room was filled with shadow.
The morning had come,
With the birth of the sun,
But the mind of the master lay fallow.
The evening had died,
But no mourner had cried,
At the coming of past day’s tomorrow.
Of the remnants remained,
On the sheet but a stain,
And the impression of leaving was shallow.
But the master had gone,
Departed he with the Dawn,
And no-one cried save the sparrow.
For ne’er had it flown,
From its high leafy thrown,
Lest Death come on the wings of an arrow.
And the master, ‘twas said,
Of sparrow had fed,
Taking ill of its fears and its sorrow.
But from his death bed,
With wings he had fled,
And Death rode in the soul that was hollow.
And the bird took a place,
In past time and space,
Retribution for that which was borrowed…
Greg added the superb drum track;
Gerry added a classic lead track &
Joey has created & added a brilliant melody to interpret the lyric.
This is an experimental mix & has excessive 'essing" on it as a result of reverb & is NOT an artifact the vocal tracks themselves.
Gerry wants to retrack for more bite in his tone & there is a little glassiness in the OH's of the drum track - again due to my adding reverb.
All will be dealt with soon,
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=3T6Q0OQ7
Apart from the stated issues is there anything else I need to address?
Here is the re upped by KC link:
Thank you sir!
New Mix (26/10/10 EDST AUS)
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=PH1ULZU0
Here's the lyric:
The Master’s Gone Away.
The sheets were grey,
Where the body had lain,
And the room was filled with shadow.
The morning had come,
With the birth of the sun,
But the mind of the master lay fallow.
The evening had died,
But no mourner had cried,
At the coming of past day’s tomorrow.
Of the remnants remained,
On the sheet but a stain,
And the impression of leaving was shallow.
But the master had gone,
Departed he with the Dawn,
And no-one cried save the sparrow.
For ne’er had it flown,
From its high leafy thrown,
Lest Death come on the wings of an arrow.
And the master, ‘twas said,
Of sparrow had fed,
Taking ill of its fears and its sorrow.
But from his death bed,
With wings he had fled,
And Death rode in the soul that was hollow.
And the bird took a place,
In past time and space,
Retribution for that which was borrowed…
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