producer tips or collaboration....

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Hi.

Im new to this forum, but was hoping to get some help from you.
I have a new song iv made, but im having a hard time producing it right. It is clearly missing some "excitement" here and there, but iv not managed to spot what to do and where.
So if you could give me some producer tips or maybe collaborate with something, i would be very thankful.
I have all the files ready in one rar file if you interested.

Iv attached the song im thinking of.

Best regards
-einar høiland-
NORWAY

 

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The recording seems clear enough to me. Are the rhythm gits double tracked? It's tough for me to tell... if they are you could spread em a little wider maybe and get a bigger sound....other than that, adding little instrumental flourishes here and there might help the momentum a little.... There seems to be a lot of verses and the arrangement seems to lag a little in places. I'm not a huge fan of the bass and percussion that comes in around 2:48. It just seems a little tight and controlled where the song might be served better by something more loose and rollicking...let those instruments ring! Nice song that just wants to feel a little less stiff.

 

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Hi.
Thanks for the replye. And yes, the gits are double tracked, panned max left and right, one is detunde 2 cent and moved some millisecounds. Maybe move them some more apart for wider sound...?
The song is verse, verse courus verse courus..........and by lag you meen it repeat itselve to some what boring, or...?
I agree with all you write, but i cant seem to get around what to do and where.......im thinking about getting som marching drums, but im having a hard time programming the midi for for ez-drummer right, cant seem to get the right beat.......
But many thanks for the rewiew....

best regards
-einar høiland-
NORWAY