Pop Rock

[PDP]

All comments about the mix and the song are welcome, I appreciate any feedback before I send it off to Spotify. Its Titled "Break Free" about trying to break the cycle of being self destructive.
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[Papanate]

All comments about the mix and the song are welcome, I appreciate any feedback before I send it off to Spotify. Its Titled "Break Free" about trying to break the cycle of being self destructive.
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Its a really good song - Really got a Stones thing moving in the guitar. Tighten up the vocals - bring them in a little later - and define them better during the chorus/bridge - keep them stronger and the synths part underneath them - they need more separation - the begining synth wash part doesn't fit - I'm not sure what I would put in there - turn up the drums and bass.

 

[Bulls Hit]

Probably personal preference but I would use less reverb on the main vocal, and bring it forward a little. When the backing vocals come in the levels even up nicely. Yeah the intro is kinda out of place, almost like it was for a different track. Good jam

 

[PDP]

Hi, Thanks for listening. Yeah at this point. The guitars should just start the song. I'm still working on the vocals but this mix is a lot cleaner.
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[Papanate]

Hi, Thanks for listening. Yeah at this point. The guitars should just start the song. I'm still working on the vocals but this mix is a lot cleaner.
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That's better - but you've taken the raw guitar and smoothed it out.