pop-rock song ... thoughts?

[Jotosuds]

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=2611&alid=-1

far from finished, but thoughts so far?

thanks.

oh the song is "untitled for now"

 

[HangDawg]

Everything is way over compressed. To much sizzle. Vocals are unintelligible, sounds like you are singing with bran muffin in your mouth. Only 43 sec long???

 

[minofifa]

hmmm, i couldn't listen, said i needed a new codec.

 

[Jotosuds]

Everything is way over compressed. To much sizzle. Vocals are unintelligible, sounds like you are singing with bran muffin in your mouth. Only 43 sec long???

yeah i tried this plugin... it was supposed to make it sound like a "pop" song lol

yeah pretty unintelligible indeed.. i don't even know what i'm saying. i always just sing some random words to get a tune, then i make lyrics...

thanks

oh yeah, were the vocals too loud in the 2nd part?