"Me and my friend wrote this"
Don't blame it on your friend.
"we did kind of a lazy job recording"
Well, why did you post it here, then? Do you think we've got nothing better to do than download lazy recordings?
"because we are not keeping"
Well, I'm not reviewing.
"but i like a lot of things about it."
I don't like anything about it. I can't even hear it.
"Please tell me what you think aside from the bad timing (no metronome), and minor mistakes."
I think it's got bad timing and small mistakes. But I don't think it's even worth posting.