Please give me some feedback with this demo

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This is a demo I'm going tho bring to the mates and would like some feedback...mostly on the song itself since it's just a demo and I'm not that great of a drummer. Thanks in advance..
 
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The tune itself is pretty good. Worth listening. Something of classic rock feel to it. :)

The quality is not all that. The vocals are not at a constant level.

The voice itself it pretty good, tho.
 
well first off update the link to sounDclick.com

For a demo sounds like a good song. Structure and melodywise.
Acoustic and drums sound good to me. I'd adjust the vocals a bit, they can sound a little harsh on my system at times. Like maybe cut a little high end or add some verb. Overall, good demo ;)
 
Big Bubba how in the hell did you find it? I still can't get to it with the link I provided.
 
rockandroller said:
Big Bubba how in the hell did you find it? I still can't get to it with the link I provided.

just change sounclick to sounDclick and it works, that's how I found it
 
It not bad quality sound-wise. There's some obvious background hum/noise - heard easily at the beginning and end. I'm hearing some clipping or distortion every so often - not sure if it's the guitar settings or the vocals. Could even be compression somewhere.

Vocals could use some compression/levelling.

Guitars and drums are good. Playing and recording.

Good tune definitely - very catchy and original. Voice reminds me of Black Crows at times. Very high range....

This recording is definitely good enough for the mates to learn the song from. Could use a bit more work to get a polished copy.

:) :D :) :cool: :D :) :cool: :D
 
rockandroller said:
Big Bubba how in the hell did you find it? I still can't get to it with the link I provided.
Hehe, we all post stuff at soundclick.com so when someone posts a link called sounclick.com and it doesn't work, of course the next to try is to change the URL. :)

Anyhoo, I'm not sure I mentioned it earlier, but the song is very cool and catchy. :)
 
Kinda Who, kinda Dylan.....kinda everything from the early 70's....I like it, could stand a lot more production time though!!!!!
 
Appeciate all the feedback. The consensus I'm get is that production is in need of help which I totally agree. I was more interested in getting songwiting feedback and such, knowing that I could do better with the recording. Thanks again to all. BTW the song went well with the band. They want to try to play it at a show tomorrow night. We'll see how it goes?????
 
I really enjoy this acoustic guitar, I like a little less pick, but hey, sounds great to me. I think it is a pretty cool song. Spend some time mixing it some more and see where you get.
 
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