Please Critique My Recording

[lowlow42]

Ok, I'm back again, with another song. Please tell me what I kind of improvement I can do. (Please don't mind the lyrics, just listen for quality [And no, its not me rapping]). Thanks in advance!

I have included the Full Song, and just the acapella.

Full Song

Acapella

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[xrap03]

what did you record with?

 

[NYMorningstar]

Post the song to the mp3 clinic and you'll get more responses.

 

[lowlow42]

what did you record with?

As far as software, I used Adobe Audition 1.5, and as far as hardware...

Marshall v57 MXL, Behringer UB802 mixer, & M-Audio 24/96 soundcard.

Post the song to the mp3 clinic and you'll get more responses.

Ok I'll try that tomorrow.