please critique, i took everyone's advice

[little guy]

well everyone, i took your advice. i double tracked the guitars, recorded by micing my amp instead of a direct line, added some reverb to the vocs, adjusted the overall balance of the volume, boosted the lows a bit to keep y'all's subwoofers from getting bored.

please, more suggestions and tips. i appreciate everyone's help.

Thanks!!

here's the link to my revamped song

 

[lbanks]

Sounds really good! Bring up the bass a bit and I think you there, IMO.

 

[little guy]

hey thanks!

 

[Dogman]

Good song. I really like the tone of the guitar at the start. Oh man, killer voice. I like her already.

I agree with the bass being a bit low. The crash at about 1:20 seems out of place. It really stuck out. Happened again about 1:55. Is that intentional? Just didn't seem to fit properly.

Dude, that is a killer tune. I really like it. A few issues that stuck out to me, but that may just be a personal preference thing, so take it for just that. Love the song. Well done.
Ed

 

[little guy]

I agree with the bass being a bit low. The crash at about 1:20 seems out of place. It really stuck out. Happened again about 1:55. Is that intentional? Just didn't seem to fit properly.

i'll definately boost that bass up some more, and i'll check out those crashes, those were kind of just thrown in there.

 

[enidenvy]

Good song. I really like the tone of the guitar at the start. Oh man, killer voice. I like her already.

hey! thanks a bunch! that means a lot!

 

[little guy]

hey! thanks a bunch! that means a lot!

just so everyone one knows, enidenvy is the vocalist on the track and she also wrote the lyrics.

 

[Dogman]

hey! thanks a bunch! that means a lot!

Well, ma'am, those vocals were great. Fit the song very well. My compliments to you all...
Ed

 

[little guy]

anyone else? suggestions?