Please criticize my Vocals! :)

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I am still learning to sing, Please help me by criticizing! :)






PS: Instrumentals were made by me :)
 
OMG.... that's godamned awful....:mad:

Kidding..

Timbre of voice sounds fine, you're a little pitchy on lower notes particularly when the phrase you're sing goes on a little run up... but better pitch control up high. Lower range definitely needs work. You should be able to check in your DAW's onboard pitch correction facility and see where you're off and practice in that range.

It's easier to critique if your voice isn't drowned in reverb. Guitar sounds better when it's not plugged in, is my other advice...
 
Armistice said:
OMG.... that's godamned awful....
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Hey, he said to criticize his voice.

To lancelot, I'll echo that your basic timbre is decent - your vocal instrument certainly has potential. However, there are many singers with decent basic instruments who fail to make good use of them. Like with any instrument how you use it makes all the difference and this is a function of your ears and what's between your ears. The biggest issue I hear is pitch - which is a very common issue. Be obsessive about focusing on pitch. No matter how vibrant a singer's voice is they're going to sound like sh1t if their pitch isn't good.

Your (?) guitar is definitely in need of tuning as well, so it seems this is an area you really need to focus on.
 
Nice register but you need to focus on making your pitch perfect. I'm not sure if you already did that, but I recommend you taking up singing lessons to improve your intonation.
 
The reason there are pitch issues have to do with how you're singing, not your ear. So obsessing about pitch won't necessarily help here. You have tremendous amounts of constriction in your sound and that is what's causing the problems. If you hd more vocal freedom you'd be able to manage the pitches better and convey a more convincing sound. The only thing I can recommend is find a teacher to help you with this.

There's definitely a voice there, so it's worth the effort I believe.
 
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