You posted like 20 minutes ago. People will respond in time. It might take a day or two, so have patience.
Nice voice. Really the only advice any singer needs is to find a good vocal coach. Support and breath control are pretty much the hardest to master if pitch is not a problem, which it is not for you. Proper support and voice placement will greatly improve your power and resonance. I can hear at times that you push from your throat instead of your center which closes off your sound...I know cuz I do the same thing. Your accent makes it hard for my american ears to understand some of the words, so maybe someone who can also help you tone down your accent, if that's something you want to do.
Thanks im new here
The only thing I heard was some strain on the highest notes, but you're a good singer, with a good voice, just remember to sing it with feeling, otherwise, practice your scales so that the transition into the higher regesters is nice and smooth.
No problem; welcome to the site.
I could only catch a little of your sample, poor internet connection. Sounded good to me. Like Dionna said, the accent shows through. You'll get better results singing in your native language.