Please Come Back is new

[up-fiddler]

This is my latest effort.

Click "Please Come Back" for the song lyrics while you listen. As always, thanks for any input you may have. That's how we all get better at what we love doing.

 

[greenie]

i took a listen. the style reminds me somehow of the monkees-era pop. anyway, good structure, nice tune & melody. only problem for me's the tone of the words. kinda whiny. and itd be nice to redo the lyrics you put up to match the song. you got talent, imho.