So, I go to Austin...come back, and it's still here...
I gotta' say, I'm really surprised (in a GREAT way) and a little bit "head-swelled" that so many of you offered input on this song. It is helping the song tremendously, but maybe more importantly, it has given me a reason to take the tune more seriously than I had. It was a very quick song to write and record, and I really never thought that more than 10 people would EVER hear it (this includes the total volume of expected CD sales on my next indie release!!!).
DavidK (kind of a perfectionist) has actually sent me a couple of additional tracks, because he wasn't happy with his original effort. God, if he's displeased with the tracks he originally sent me, I can't WAIT to hear what the new ones sound like. I do plan to (briefly) re-post the song with Mr. Kempers' new takes in a month or so, along with the rest of the "Album Cuts" when I feel like they're ready for final tweaking, but for now, I'll just repeat my gushing of gratitude for David's help on this.
Jags, Participant, Fenderlikingood, Alibish, a modified dog; I don't want to take up more space than I already have, but please know that I VERY MUCH appreciate your listening, and your comments.
Paul881, I do have to point out that you picked up on my favorite part of the song...that little bass riff. I never played a bass before about 5 months ago when I got tired of all of my tracks sounding EXACTLY the same. (2 acoustic tracks, 45 or so vocal tracks

). I picked up a $100 Fender "Bronco" bass (short neck), and I live in perpetual fear that I'm playing it "wrong." That riff was an accident that I kept. As a writer, your comments about parenthood and being able to relate to the song mean more than most people on this planet can possibly understand.
So let's put this one to bed for awhile; we need the space on the front page for all of Muzeman's non-music posts!!!

(besides, if this thread stays alive much longer, I'm scared to death that Mixmkr is eventually gonna' get around to listening to it and ripping it apart and making me want to start over from scratch...I DON'T HAVE TIME FOR THAT!!!).
THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!
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-chris