Peep my NEW beat!

[DJMYSTIK]

Yeah, whats up everyone? I'm new to this board. Would appreciate it if you would peep my beat. Like some feedback.
holla...

www.mp3.com/StreetHeaven

 

[LDYLEE]

ahhhhh, nice lil feel there

this flows, what did u use to make this beat i like, I can just hear lyrics flowing on this one (<---) thinking ,

Newbie here, im learning i have posted my first beat i ever made, i want to go further with this but a sista needs sum feed back on if its busted up or if i maybe will get to a point where i'll be doing things !!



was also wondering do u have other beats and are you going post ;would like to hear more.


http://artists.iuma.com/IUMA/Bands/LDYLEE/
if u get aq chance check it out for me and let me know something, even if its bad , thats cool way for me to learn
thanks
Ldy

 

[stray411]

This has got a real cool flare to it. I didn't like how the synth line and piano line traded off every other 2 bar at first, but after I heard it a few times I could see how this could make for some nice flows.

I'm not sure if this is just a work in progress or what, but you'll probably want to have a hook section at least every 32 bars. I didn't hear a hook. Other than that, nice work.

Stray

 

[DJMYSTIK]

Thanks for the love Lady. I started my own record label, so I've been looking for some new artists. Lemme know if u r interested.
djmystic24@yahoo.com

 

[Ace_TX]

that is on some beverly hill cop type shit

jus needs more changeup and a rhyme

 

[Abyyss]

I'm not too keen on the piano line that comes in - it seems out of place, unless ur planning on having the entire thing shared and have the normal bits with one rapper and the piano bits with another.

I like those orchestra strings in the background and the main beat.

 

[LDYLEE]

yeah id like to know about your new record label
hit me up sometimes

peace
Ldy

 

[Hi_D_Ho_Man]

Pretty hot beat. like mentioned before a few change ups would help