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DrewPeterson7
Sage of the Order
Couple suggestsions:
I'd end that "simulated tube sound more or less successfully." It sounds way less awkward.
I'm a grammar/word nut, and I even had to google "ineluctable." Inevitable or unavoidable would probably be more accessible in context (let's be honest, we guitarists aren't all the sharpest bunch), but "connectivity and the inevitable guitar input connector" still sounds, well, odd. If you want to start off here, I'd be more inclined to be a little more straight forward - "Let's start off with connectivity. Pretty straightforward stuff - plug your guitar in where it says "input" (There's even a joke...)"
"Every endless encoder is surrounded by a LED indicating the effect..." Encoder? I THINK you're talking about the knobs on the amp, but I'm not sure...
Anyway, a few bits of feedback - a couple changes here and there would make the article easier to understand.
I'd end that "simulated tube sound more or less successfully." It sounds way less awkward.
I'm a grammar/word nut, and I even had to google "ineluctable." Inevitable or unavoidable would probably be more accessible in context (let's be honest, we guitarists aren't all the sharpest bunch), but "connectivity and the inevitable guitar input connector" still sounds, well, odd. If you want to start off here, I'd be more inclined to be a little more straight forward - "Let's start off with connectivity. Pretty straightforward stuff - plug your guitar in where it says "input" (There's even a joke...)"
"Every endless encoder is surrounded by a LED indicating the effect..." Encoder? I THINK you're talking about the knobs on the amp, but I'm not sure...
Anyway, a few bits of feedback - a couple changes here and there would make the article easier to understand.
muttley600
Banned
Couple suggestsions:
I'd end that "simulated tube sound more or less successfully." It sounds way less awkward.
I'm a grammar/word nut, and I even had to google "ineluctable." Inevitable or unavoidable would probably be more accessible in context (let's be honest, we guitarists aren't all the sharpest bunch), but "connectivity and the inevitable guitar input connector" still sounds, well, odd. If you want to start off here, I'd be more inclined to be a little more straight forward - "Let's start off with connectivity. Pretty straightforward stuff - plug your guitar in where it says "input" (There's even a joke...)"
"Every endless encoder is surrounded by a LED indicating the effect..." Encoder? I THINK you're talking about the knobs on the amp, but I'm not sure...
Anyway, a few bits of feedback - a couple changes here and there would make the article easier to understand.
You actually went to Audiofailzine and read the review?
DrewPeterson7
Sage of the Order
Our email server/app is down. I'm REALLY bored. 
ibleedburgundy
The Anti-Lambo
I give it a thumbs down just for having a stupid name. 
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Chater-La
New member
DrewPeterson, thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I'll revisit the text and make some adjustments....but probably not till later. Going climbing now. 
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Chater-La
New member
I give it a thumbs down just for having a stupid name.
what stupid name are you referring to? Peavey? It can't be 'viper' cause viper is cool. So it must be Peavey, true....not a very hard rock name (sound a bit like peewee
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