well, not a bad start for just getting into recording, but you've got plenty to work on.........
good things......
1. good vocal recording
2. stereo drums
things that would help........
1. bring up the voice more and maybe EQ some more room for it...it's a little buried right now
2. use the stereo field on the rest of the recording rather than just the drums....the mix sounds mono except on the drum fills
3. i'd lose a little of the reverb on the guitar
hope that helps.......good start