Past Comes Alive

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jonlint

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Hi all,

Here is a new song "Past Comes Alive" written and recorded this weekend. Feedback most welcome:



LYRICS:
Hmmm
Tear drops in the wine
Aged, maturity
Searchin’, I still can’t find
All life’s impurities
Took another sip of wine
Then it came to me
Just leave everythin’ behind, with
Life security

Cause when the past comes alive
Hauntin’ you, draggin’ you
Down the depths of your mind
Break away, don’t let
The past come alive
Hmmm
The past come alive

Hmmm
Walkin’ life’s fine line
Learning, ‘n’ leavin’ behind
Each tear drop in my wine
A blessed impurity
Up ahead now I see
Scars on my life now healed
A glace behind me
Then ahead to keep it sealed

Cause when the past comes alive
Hauntin’ you, draggin’ you
Down the depths of your mind
Break way, break way
Cause when the past comes alive
Hauntin’ you, draggin’ you
Down the depths of your mind
Break way, don’t let
The past come alive…
Don’t let the past come alive…
 
I just gave it a quick listen on headphones but it sounded pretty good. Good vibe on the song, reminded me a bit of STP with the way you do the timing.
 
lots of atmosphere.
what are you using for reverb?
sounds like Chris Cornell singing.
ok the high note at 2:57 to 3:04 - yeah that rocks.
excellent production.
 
Cool. This song reminds me of Dream Theater. The only thing is the mix is a bit not clear. I also have been struggling with the same problem.
 
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