Phantoms 3. I did notice there were 1 & 2, so maybe my critique is wrong. If so, you should maybe say Part 1, 2, 3 on each title.
OK, mix sounded pretty good. nothing I could hear. Production note, sounds like a good intro into something, a build up to something, but something never came. My two cents, I would pull this back, and find something to put on the back end, shorten what you have, then let it lead into the main. Often done, one of the best examples of how to do that is Supertramp. If you don't know them, they were masters of doing what you have and then getting it to kick into something else.
But you have a great into (or end), nice mix, just seemed like we started a journey that warmed up, but never got started. Maybe as stated 1 & 2 did the trick, didn't get a chance to listen.