organically grown.....lol

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humf!

now im going to have to do something with just my voice and a jew's harp.

thanks a lot.

it really was better at the faster speed. you should try listening to it fast if you can. nice and short and funny too.

i was sure that was how it was supposed to be so of course i wanted to hear the highest quality even if it took a half hour to get it.

i was amazed thats its really supposed to be slow!

:p
 
I always love your songs. Awsome writing as always. Great lyrics. As always A+++
 
Hey Jamal,
...Its "ALL" about the song man. I look at recording as just a way to give great songs an accurate representation. I would personally much rather listen to a Great song that is recorded sub par, than a shiny, glistening...........turd. I know this is a mixing clinic, but i get more of a rush out of the songs written around here than the engineering end .....but thats me. Great song man........ .....and the recording aint too bad either.


ggggggg:D
 
The more I think about this, the more I would say that you should remake this song. So I'll probably disagree with Guernica on this a bit. I do share his opinion that I'd rather listen to a great song recorded sub-par than a terrific production of a song-writing trainwreck. But I just think this song is good to the point where it deserves a better effort.

I should probably re-listen before saying this, but what the hell. I think the song would be better with a more traditional rock quartet - two electric guit parts, a bass, and drums. For sure this song wouldn't be well supported with a wild drum part. It just needs something to keep the tempo. A nice bass line would enhance it significantly.

I think this is a terrific song, and if it were mine, I'd get a better production for it.

Now flame my sorry butt.
 
maybe faster and with pitch shifted voices to sound like chipmunks?

i really like the concept of the lyrics. sabbath did the same kind of thing??? so its ok if i steal it? isnt there a dance or something where everything is switched around?

you should post the lyrics like i did on my last one with words. everybody should do that so we can swipe each other's lyrics easier.

hahahaha im just kidding right?

i think when you woof the drum parts you should woof so its not so woofy.

:)
 
heya Jamal-I'm a little late for this train(and the train to opposite land leaves on time right?) but just wanted to say I likes this alot-good singing and great lyrics! I had to listen on my crappy comp speakers so no mix comments but this song pretty much transcends its mix. Some real great lines in here an A+ for lyrics-very good my man!
 
very creative song... vocal percussion is realy cool... and the words are humorous too...
 
i wanna live in opposite land!

funny song. the "drum" track could have used a little more. maybe adding a few more busy body parts.. errr instruments to it.

great song overall.
 
erichenryus:....thanks man...and yep i "sang"..all the drum parts...lol...it is such a quirky song i thought it would be funny...that was the first line i wrote btw....Thanks..

jeap:...as per your request....there is a version on my site titled"dance remix"....that is way faster and stuff.. a freind did it and sent it to me...prety funny actually...

king elvis.:...hey nice new avatar!!!...thanks thts a cool thing to say...really...thats better grades then i ever got in school....:D

guernica:...that is exactly the same way i feel...in fact most comments i make on songs are based on the viewpoint of "listener"..not "engineer"...im glad there are people here to give you pointers...but im just not one of them...and just to reiterate my previous statement...YER NEW SONG ROCKS...!!!..EVRRYBODY GO LISTEN RIGHT NOW...STOP READING THIS AND GO LISTEN TO IT....IT IS WORTH IT...

EMINEMANEM:...i hear ya man...and if i wasnt already on the next song i would....but i really did this as a joke.....heres the deal i was tellin a freind how i couldnt seem to get a good mix on any of my rock stuff...so therefore i was now going.."acoustic"..cause it must be easier...lol.....that was all...and this is what became of it...i never really intended to post it...but it sorta started to sound pretty cool so i did......i know you like the song and for tht i say thanks...i just have a really short attention span....:D

jeap:..lol again.....hey if you really want the lyrics i can send them to ya....but if you record ityou have to post it so i can hear it...deal???

stratomaster:..."transcends the mix"....that is brilliant...man ...what a cool thing to say thanks...:D

fed:...thank you ...i thought the frums were a great idea...its sorta 50/50 split so far.....

jr97:...lol....me too i want to too...did you like the idea??....the drums i mean?


thanks again all.....trully great responses all the way around...now my freinds will have to beleive me when i tell them .."no really ..total strangers liked it..?"........:D ...jamal
 
Yeah baby!

You definitely have a firm grasp on your sense of irony. :D

VERY cool, engaging, and pleasantly gimmicky piece. The devices you've used to make the layers of points you're making are deftly placed and very effective.

My only gripe is the outta tune rhythm guitar. I know you were doing it for effect, but for those of us "with pitch", it's grating... :)

I'd love to hear what Weird AL would do with this. I heard his voice, man... :)

Well done!!!

Cheers,
Phil "Llarion: The Jazzinator" Traynor
Smooth Jazz
www.llarion.com
- Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons;
for you are crunchy, and go well with ketchup.
 
Great lyrics! This definitely has a novelty feel to it. Very cool that you did the entire thing by yourself (organic that is...)

I couldn't stop laughing at the Olsen Twins line!

Great stuff! :)
 
great song!

jamal-
opposite land-
it's a great lyric.
a marcy playground approach....... with a more harder sound, full kit...... and this would go on the radio dude...
as it is, it's really funny and engaging...

i like the vocal approach, and the harmonies work well......
this song's almost too short.....

"michael jackson sells coffee........"
LMAO-
great song!
 
Well as long as it's back and seeing as how I missed it the first time... This has hit written all over it - the song. Fuck the mix. I'm with Guernica, it's all about the song. This is a good one. Well done.
 
chrisharris said:
Jamal:
Mix comments? Who the fuck cares?!?!?!?!
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Sky Blue Lou said:
Fuck the mix. I'm with Guernica, it's all about the song
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Let the record show that I was CLEARLY the first person to to use the words "fuck" and "your mix" in relation to this thread. Ooooh...I get it; just b/c Guernica is cool and can mix and stuff, you're all about kissing up and stuff.

whatEVER.

:D
(this was a joke, of course - just b/c you're not laughing does not mean it was not a joke...just a bad one)
 
Sorry Chris. Let me set the record straight.

Fuck what chrisharris says...I'm with Guernica. :D

BTW - I did laugh!

lou
 
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dr. demento is calling your name. ;)

and that's the biggest complement I've given anyone here. I love novelty tunes.
 
Jamal been berry berry funny to me! Michael Jackson selling coffee? Love it!

Bob
 
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