Opinions?

[HellsFallenHero]

This is just a little scratch bit my brother and I did for my bands song Bullet.

We were attempting to get a decent tone. And I think it's alright. Pretty decent for home recording noobs.

This is the only song our band has that for the most part is 'breakdowns'.

Anyways, can I get opinions? What would you guys suggest we do to make it sound better?

(We're using POD Farm, and Ozone. P.S, ignore the drums. We're hoping on fixing them.)

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1119779

 

[legionserial]

Yeah, that tone is pretty decent. Especially for a modelled tone.

Personally, the part before the breakdown seems kinda loose. Playing could be tightened up a bit. Once the breakdown hit, it all seemed to come together quite nicely though.

Might help to back off on the gain ever so slightly. Not by a lot, just by a little. That's personal preferance though.