Opinion please. My new Trance Tune

[norsez]

Hi, I am new here.
I have a new trance track up at http://www.mp3.com/norsez
It's called Possessed by a Dutchman. Feedbacks are very welcome thanks!

 

[gibs]

I downloaded this yesterday, between getting the usual messages that this site had a teeny eenie problem.....
I don't have occassion to listen to a lot of trance, so maybe the following comments are without merit to this genre....I thought the kick sound was way too up front, and that the layered synth sounds could use more separation, because they seemed buried by each other...for instance at about 3:26, the moog-like sound could have really been more up front....but there were other times as well, that the synths were buried....I dug the distorted vocal....you put a lot of work into this tune!....gibs

 

[mixmkr]

I agree with all the comments of the above post. Some separation would really help. Also, the kick drum feels out of beat on the 1/8th notes...it needs more of a different quantization other than a *straight* feel. I like this kind of stuff, but the only problem I have with it is I know you can whip this stuff together using Sonic Foundry Acid and *maybe* achieve similar results.