I really kind of like this song. I don't usually don't care much for instrumentals. But this one has a nice feel to it. The transition at :24 is beautiful. I liked the guitar tone - very good for a guy who was struggling just last week.
The organ at about 1:00 doesn't seem to fit. Ok by 1:15 I'm liking it better. The "falling off the table" ending is kind of weird. Ok the whole song is a bit weird so I guess it fits.
The piano is off tempo in a couple of spots. I'll bet you already know that.
What happens with the drums at about :58? They have some kind of clicking going on.