Well, RAMI, I listened to this with fresh ears. I can't say you improved this a lot, as the first version was pretty damn good. (compliment here) I can't even think of anything to add to this, as it really is a good recording/mix. You perform things well, and seem to capture the sounds very well. I'm sure there are always things that could be picked at, but almost every commercial recording has shit that someone can pick at, so what can I say???
I like it. The drums might be cool with a bit more ooommmph, but then they might be over the top. Vocals could have some nifty effects, but then the whole song would take on another complexion, and nothing might fit. Your sound is unique, and not overprocessed, and effects don't stand out. I really like this aspect, myself. It doesn't remind me of any pop crap I hear now, and that's a good thing.(compliment again... I know how some people read into things.....don't do it here. This is a simple message...)
Just so you know, your shit, along with many other tunes from the mixing clinic, are listened to very heavily, every day on my stereo. I am no expert, but know what I like. Your stuff, LPC, Tim Lawler.....many others, make great music, and it's all different. I really enjoy listening, and think there are many talented people here. (this is just a rant by the way...) Keep it up, and don't overdo anything.....meaning take the fun out of what you do. If you make $35 million selling your music, disregard everything I say, and buy me a beer....
And as Ghost would say.....
Cheers.
Ed