okay if this ain't heavy?

[TripleM]

Third Nipple ...
Chad

That's Mr. Third Nipple to you buddy.

 

[Toki987]

hey, I like that. Its got a good feel all the way thru. That hook chorus is cool. drums doing good too. Would you mind if I downloaded it? I`d like to play along with that and see what steams up.

 

[fenderlikingood]

another vote for full production!!!!!!!

But Mr. parTee in yo pizzant's, you have caused me a serious dilema!!!

I have just thrown my snare out the window, a 10" tom is about to follow!!! but i'm thinking to myself........."stop chunking your drums out the fucking window you moron!!!!!!!" because i could sell them!!! and BUy some better equiptment, and learn to program like chad!!!!!

But alas,(swoon) i love my drum's so much!!!! So YOU are the cause of this mental masturbation!!!!!!

this song and the C.H.,G, AND J collab , have some MAD drum sound's!!!!

this tune is great, man!!!! i say do it up!!!!!! This song is catchy as hell!!!!!!!!!!

You suck!!!!


thanks, chad!!!!

peace

Rick

 

[Jagular]

I can't add a whole lot to the comments above.

I like the song. It sounded pretty clean to me (through my ass puter speakers). Guits had a different sound, but I kind of started liking it as I listened. I would retrack the vox. I thought I heard some distorting going on in a few places.

I could definitely hear this being more produced with a harder rock feel as well, but it also works with the less produced approach.

 

[alibish]

I like the song.

The vocal is cool, but some bits could probably do with being re-tracked. Definitely reminiscent of Morrissey - that's a compliment! A touch of reverb on the vocal would be nice.

I also like the drum sound. I'd probably put a bit of verb on them, and maybe also a wee bit of warm distortion.

I'd like to hear a bass, and also the occasional harmony.

The toms are a bit boomy sometimes.

I love the so-ya-ya-ho-ho-row stuff - brilliant.

Good song, but for me it would be improved by a bit more development.

Hope this helps

AB

 

[participant]

wrapping up this stale fish

Thanks again for listening to the unfinished Morrissey ripoff

Mr. MMM -- You know, Crash Test Dummies wrote a song about you Oh... another note about the lyrics:

...how bad could the bullet be?
Take a bite....

If your comments about "so-so" lyrics take that in consideration... i tried to play "take a bite" off the word "bullet".... as in "bite the bullet"... most of these lyrics I really tried to get double-meanings out of, or write in such a way that they'd be interpreted at least two different ways. "blood in vain (vein)"... worthless wounds refers to useless pain... reinforcing how worthless life was at that point. "Full of emptynesss"... again... "darkness shines"... etc...

I just hope my lyrics are at least two steps above anything Lenny Kravitz ever wrote (I hope )

Toke-ey I'd be honored As always, anyone may feel free to improve my musical hacking. Thanks for that.

Peace Rick, the Fender Lick I see Mr.QQ's influence in you is strong (psst... your attendance at the jamfest is MANDATORY ) If you're gonna keep throwing your stuff out the window, at least mic it up. Hell... the sound of your drums hitting the lawn may sound like you're covering one of my turds

And I only started "sucking", because this mailman gig doesn't pay enough j/k... keep me rollin, rickster

The Jugular, Tha Aorta You definitely heard distortion which means you definitely are a great listener Sorrow may indeed feel the soft pinch of hard rock (whoa... do I really want to say "soft pinch"? who knows )... Thanks for listening.

alibish Thank you, thank you, thank you. Man, I think you're the first one from o'er the pond that has commented on any of my tunes ... (well...any of the serious tunes)... Thanks esp. for that. The guitar and vox tracks are out the door, as soon as my voice starts sounding good/I have the time... and when those two happen concurrently Great comments -- keeping them for future reference. Thanks again


Ok... talk about "mental masturbation"... ... I think this is enough self-ego stroking...

Truthfully, I officially now am sick of this thread... and hope that it sinks like a rock from here on. Everyone's suggestions are invaluable to me, so thanks from the bottom of my gut once again.

LET IT SINK... LET IT SINK... let it sink... please

Chad... (thrilled to think he can pass himself off as a 'musician', even with this tripe )

 

[theron]

Hey participant,

Thanks for the shout on the other thread.

I'm way late on this tune as far as feedback and I've missed oh so much in general I'm sure. However, one must get back on the horse somehow so I'll use your tune as a stirrup (if you will).

I liked the accent/backup vox in the verse but, it made me want some backup on the "sorrow" chorus as well. Balance, I guess.
Totally dug the dry vox. It sounded good and is a crisp reminder to my verb habit that ya don't need it every day just to feel ok about thangs.

Even with this semi-minimal recording, I'd dub the git and pan tight on both sides. My head was cocked like a chicken............head, cock, chicken??.........anywayzzzzzz. That's my nickle.

peace and blessed sorrow,

Theron.

Oh fuck!! I just read your last post. Damn my timing to hell!

Let it sink, I said nothing. This bump didn't really happen...........

 

[David]

Liked this alot Chad. Really liked all the chord changes..sounds good. Vocals were to dry for my taste, but I tend to hide behind a wall of verb...for good reason mind you . This is a cool tune ya got going, enjoyed it and sorry for the bump... NOT!

 

[jcmm]

I was suprised when I heard this.
I was expecting my eyebrows to melt so this is a pleasant suprise.

I can't add much new to what has already been said.
Its a real interesting melody. I would add Bass, and a little added percussion would play nice with the vocals and phrasing (especially at the end)

I got a kick out of this one .

Joel