Ok, second try. Does it make you wanna punch your mom in the face?
Nilbog
hello
I like the guitar and the whole kinda monk singing thing. The rest of the vocals (the low stuff) don't sound passionate enough for the song or something. Maybe if you were yelling htem the whole time.
I really dig the part that starts around 1:55 where it slows down - thats tight. I love songs that slow down and speed up and throw in a few different styles and build up and everything.
I really dig the part that starts around 1:55 where it slows down - thats tight. I love songs that slow down and speed up and throw in a few different styles and build up and everything.
jake-owa
Banned
This actually sounds kinda comical with the evil voice in there.
I loooove the roaaaaaaa....
I'm feeling peaceful and giggly not agressive in any way.
Weird break for the style...funny stuff.
Wild ride man.
I loooove the roaaaaaaa....
I'm feeling peaceful and giggly not agressive in any way.
Weird break for the style...funny stuff.
Wild ride man.
Khompewtur
*Retired*
ahhhhh crap!...
another one star???
It can NOT be that bad.. jeez
(Not you jake)
another one star???
It can NOT be that bad.. jeez
(Not you jake)
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Pedullist
Stop it, I can't breathe
Hey, I like the composition and the guitarplaying.
This could be a lot better if you'd make the mix more aggressive & sick, in your face. It sounds muffled. Cut some mids & add some highs in the guitars and drums. Add some effects on the vocals to make them thicker and sicker (use compression and a short 10ms delay with distortion/chorus added on just the delayed sound for instance). And please don't fade the guitars during the verses...it sounds really weird when you raise their volume after you stopped singing. I first thought it was a badly programmed ducking compressor. O, and I'd choose a longer reverb for the vocals in the middle section.
Check your PM, I've send you something to prove my point...
This could be a lot better if you'd make the mix more aggressive & sick, in your face. It sounds muffled. Cut some mids & add some highs in the guitars and drums. Add some effects on the vocals to make them thicker and sicker (use compression and a short 10ms delay with distortion/chorus added on just the delayed sound for instance). And please don't fade the guitars during the verses...it sounds really weird when you raise their volume after you stopped singing. I first thought it was a badly programmed ducking compressor. O, and I'd choose a longer reverb for the vocals in the middle section.
Check your PM, I've send you something to prove my point...
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erichenryus
New member
my mom is dead.
nice guitars.
nice guitars.
Toki987
Rock Steady
well not, but I thought it was cool stuff. 
like Ped said, make it a little more showtime dynamic and sparkly. Other than that its pretty cool
like Ped said, make it a little more showtime dynamic and sparkly. Other than that its pretty cool
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Kwality
Interesting mix!
The Drums are WAYYYY buried in the distorted parts.
Neat voices and stuff. I think Pedullist gave some good advice.
Seriously, this would kick some serious ass if you brought the Drum kit up to where it should be.
The Drums are WAYYYY buried in the distorted parts.
Neat voices and stuff. I think Pedullist gave some good advice.
Seriously, this would kick some serious ass if you brought the Drum kit up to where it should be.
Khompewtur
*Retired*
Yah major props to Pedullist on this because he's been giving me an edjumacashun on compressors and eq's and whatnots..
I keep trying to find more headroom for the drums and stuff, i squish out like a db or two each time through.
My stupid clip meter, I'm afraid of it now!!!
erichenryus: I was not talking about your mom. Sorry.
jake: HEY!! This song is not about like puppies and rainbows and shit, you can't be feeling giggly and peaceful. You're like supposed to go like bite the head off a wizard or something and then like totally flip out like a ninja and pork a babe and wail hard on your guitar!!!
I keep trying to find more headroom for the drums and stuff, i squish out like a db or two each time through.
My stupid clip meter, I'm afraid of it now!!!
erichenryus: I was not talking about your mom. Sorry.
jake: HEY!! This song is not about like puppies and rainbows and shit, you can't be feeling giggly and peaceful. You're like supposed to go like bite the head off a wizard or something and then like totally flip out like a ninja and pork a babe and wail hard on your guitar!!!
muzeman
New member
Cool tune,I like the vocal panning/interplay.
Nice job on the production.
If you would have started the song with some of the break at 1:50,the hard rythym hits mixed with the sweet vocals and guitars,I think it would have a much bigger impact when the song starts.
A little tease,know what I mean.
JMHOP
You have a fine voice,and the guitars sounded great.
I dig the mix!
Pete
Nice job on the production.
If you would have started the song with some of the break at 1:50,the hard rythym hits mixed with the sweet vocals and guitars,I think it would have a much bigger impact when the song starts.
A little tease,know what I mean.
JMHOP
You have a fine voice,and the guitars sounded great.
I dig the mix!
Pete
Wireneck
New member
Im with jake on this one
anger is about the last emotion im experiencing while listening to this.
The drums (drum machine?) are almost non-existent in the mix. The vocals sound like they are sitting out on top of everything else. I would work on getting a better balance between everything and more punch in the mix as everyone else has suggested. I would also consider re-tracking those vocals if you want them to be anger inducing lol. They almost sound like Dog Fashion disco at times which is why i sort of laugh while hearing this.
Are the lyrics for this song serious? just curious
anger is about the last emotion im experiencing while listening to this.
The drums (drum machine?) are almost non-existent in the mix. The vocals sound like they are sitting out on top of everything else. I would work on getting a better balance between everything and more punch in the mix as everyone else has suggested. I would also consider re-tracking those vocals if you want them to be anger inducing lol. They almost sound like Dog Fashion disco at times which is why i sort of laugh while hearing this.
Are the lyrics for this song serious? just curious
Jagular
Active member
Hmmmm....interesting. Drums are way back....but you've hear that already .
Interesting stuff. I hear some neat things going on here. Lyrics are a bit anger ridden for my taste, but that's my taste. It does over all sound a little dark, like the whole thing could use some air. Not bad though IMHO.
.Interesting stuff. I hear some neat things going on here. Lyrics are a bit anger ridden for my taste, but that's my taste. It does over all sound a little dark, like the whole thing could use some air. Not bad though IMHO.
jake-owa
Banned
Jezus, you's a funny friggin bastard. I love it!Khompewtur said: