Ok here's my second try

[Pahtcub]

Ok here it is, 4 tracks, less reverb on the vocals, and SIR reverb replacing everything inserted instead of sent. Tell me what you think, I know the song and singing is horrible. http://www.soundclick.com/util/DownloadSong.cfm?ID=1131243 or http://www.soundclick.com/pahtcub under the song Leave.

Pat

 

[chrisjorge]

The drums are way to distant. Bring them up front for a strong ballad groove. Less reverb too, maybe except for the snare.

Try to dry the vocal up even more too. It is also a little too distant. Maybe try a little delat instead of reverb. Play with that a little bit.

Love the comments on the end. Tell us how you really feel!

 

[Pahtcub]

Wow I just went and listened to that source and I have to say that the wav-mp3 conversion really sucked, I didn't notice it was that bad on the mp3, I'm going to try to get it a little cleaner. Thanks for the comments.

Pat

 

[Laynestaley]

The drums are a little dull (drumcomputer). Some more variation would be nice. Too much reverb overall.
I like your voice. I think the song could do with some vocal harmonies here and there.