OK a little help needed

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gec said:
One day everything I know is gonna go,

All I can do is grab this mic an' flow

n' let the whole world know Abyss is 'bout to blow

Catch this moment and make it last forever, ho

Even though everything I know is 'bout to go,

I sit back - relax - mix the tracks an' lock the flow,

Eternity has never ever stooped so low,

But now's my chance, I got mad skillz ta show. Yooooooooooo
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Gec, that's a cool idea you dropped there that looks like it would work real nice.

Abyyss, no I won't need the score. And just to be clear you want everything exactly how it is now as far as instrumentation and sound types. You just want me to use better sounds right?

Stray
 
Yeah. We'll start with that so I can hear how it would sound, but if you want to go to town and do a big remix job on it then I don't mind - just as long as I hear how it could sound with better sounds.
 
man cant wait

to hear this finished product......... as soon as u post it be assured ill be right there listening to it, you have a good beat selected, and summ flows working ought to be off the chains

:cool: :cool: :cool: :cool: :cool: :cool:

Peace
Ldy
:cool:
 
Yeah. I think this one's gonna be good.

I'm gettin' that special feeling already.

BTW, 2nd verse is half-complete.
 
cool

do you have any idea when i should start watching for it??
 
Well I'm currently getting about a verse every 2 days done, but I doubt I'll be working on Xmas:D

Then I need reherse it over and over until I'm sick of the song (a week or so?)

Then recording should take about 2/3 days.

Whenever that works out is the expected I guess. But it may be held back as I'm gonna try and make a name for myself and enter Sol's competition.
 
lol yes im waiting patiently to hear it, but dont wanna keep you in the lad over the holidays:D :D :D :D :D

Dig i feel you, well i guess i can wait, oh and GOOD LUCK with Sol's competition..if you enter it

Ldy
:cool:
 
I'll probably have to go to the lab over the holidays -> it's the computer in the dining room, so, unless I decide to eat off the floor, I'll probably go there.

You're lookin' at a real pro. here:D
 
lmao...ok, Pro......look no (>>>):D :D :D :D :D :D :D
you do the damn thing and work your act boyee,:) your flows r tight like i stated so (i know) you'll do sum holiday work on it... just make sure that Pc aint in the way of the holidaY eats aiight;) :D :D :D :D :D
lol

Ldy
:cool:
 
All the lyrics are pretty much finished!

I must of had a creative spurt today, 'coz I got quite a bit of the lyrics for Sol's competition done, too.
 
originally posted by gec
One day everything I know is gonna go,

All I can do is grab this mic an' flow

n' let the whole world know Abyss is 'bout to blow

Catch this moment and make it last forever, ho

Even though everything I know is 'bout to go,

I sit back - relax - mix the tracks an' lock the flow,

Eternity has never ever stooped so low,

But now's my chance, I got mad skillz ta show. Yooooooooooo
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i think you can do with out using ho. if it's a derrogatory statement it will take away from the character of the song. it just doesn't fit this song, but if i'm confusing that word for profanity i apologize gec. but if it is profane, you may want to consider other options. i use a lot of profanity and i'm trying to wean myself off of it. i haven't checked the beat out but, the lyrics posted sound like it's going to be good.
 
Damn, thread came back to life :D

Could try this:

One day everything I know is gonna go,

All I can do is grab this mic an' flow

n' let the whole world know Abyyss is 'bout to blow

Catch this moment and make it last forever, (shout in back: just flow!)

Even though everything I know is 'bout to go,

I sit back - relax - mix the tracks an' lock the flow,

Eternity has never ever stooped so low,

But now's my chance, I got mad skillz ta show. Yooooooooooo
 
Just realise - looks like whoeva provided tha beat ain't on mp3.com anymore so it don't look like u'll be able to hear it.

Guess y'all just have to wait till it drops.
 
i would have used both of em sorta like a variation...cause they both was ill. but as a an artist do what you think sounds good to you. its good to ask for honest critism but it all comes down to what you like.
 
I like 'em both - that's why I asked.

But it's also nice to bounce ideas off other people.
 
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