Oct-Nov Challenge . Emptiness lyrics

[louisv]

So that's mine:: It's a one verse song, i know it's short but that's it. I've already recorded it once but I'm not happy with the result so I'll try to record it again and post it some time next week maybe.


I've been walking
on a road so empty
no one drivin'
sidewalks lonely

tell me brother
how is mom doing
our loving mother
is she farm shopping

yeah what' up with dad
he remembers me ?
glad he's not mad
at me..

and how about my big brother
he taught me everything
is he still a lawyer
just like i still sing

and hey what's up with you
is your cat alright
what you got two?
now thats not right

haha yeah i'm comming back
just to take some rest
but when i came back
home was an empty nest

 

[gecko zzed]

Welcome to the challenge, louisv. It's great to seem some new and different people contributing!

I note that you have some difficulty with 'though' in your lyrics. With these challenges, we leave comments until the end date. But I think we can afford to be a bit more relaxed when it comes to translation problems.

I think the word you are looking for is 'taught'. It would make sense.

 

[louisv]

Welcome to the challenge, louisv. It's great to seem some new and different people contributing!

I note that you have some difficulty with 'though' in your lyrics. With these challenges, we leave comments until the end date. But I think we can afford to be a bit more relaxed when it comes to translation problems.

I think the word you are looking for is 'taught'. It would make sense.

thanks i just didn't know how to write that