nobody's watchin, nobody cares

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song idea -

dont have a beat for this - but wanna collaborate wit someone . . .


my verse:

i slipped and fell down to the bottom of a well now
and came to the realization life on earth is hellbound
its not a geographic location found on the map though
but right up in the middle of ya brain is where its at yo
opposites attract so when thinkin on that level
the mirror point to who is god which tells you who's the devil
cuz they both go together like partners n crime
and thats the way it is n been sine they started wit time:
observin witout judgement - well then who slams the gavel?
and wisdom only comes to the few who can travel
that’s when the eyes wide shut who choose to view casually
wit no uncertainty git flung open rapidly
by the hurricane windstorms of cold hard reality
cuz love’s gonna getchu - regardless of ya salary
and when u stuck inside them anaconda grips of pain
the grave yard got ya spirit along wit ya brain
 
Iown really kno what the song is about exactly but check the beat on my myspace page Long Days Cold Nights and tell me if that goes wit the vibe of what u was thinkin.... and maybe if u write a hook i can do a verse..... cause i figure the hook a be a lil easier to figure out where u goin wit it
 
I might have to get in on this once u figure out what the direction is
 
oh yea!!! i found it - and oh yea!!!! that is definitely on somethin - i will get crackin on the hook for that joint!!! im a post up (hopefully) before teh weekend is over!
 
ok i got a possible hook - DEEP CONCENTRATION!!! this is for the hip hop heads/backpackaz that wanna chew on some well cooked food for thought!
song title: "as good as it gets"
song idea: hanging on by a thread . . . keep hanging!

as i travel down the perilous paths of my mind
was told "turn to god . . just ask n u'll find"
at that fork in the road both turns showed danger
i called on him, but he don't answer to no stranger
and so i came to learn that they advice was phony
cuz who am i to Him - that would sacrificed his own G?
life is . . . up a creek wit no paddle in site
thats as good as it gets - so i battle n fite!
 
So u tryin to do this joint to that Long Days Cold Nights Beat? if so ill go ahead and send u that joint..... u can record your verse and the hook... u can do a verse at the end 2 if u want..... and ill put a verse on there second..... just let me kno
 
Yea That'll Work - Once I Git The Track I'll Bump It In The Whip - The Hook May Change . . . Most Of Writing Gits Re-drafted In The Vehicle So . .
 
and if u want when u record u can send me your vocals and ill mix the whole joint
 
YO that shit is crazy hot son.... i need u to send me ur vocals tho so i can mix that joint down and lay a verse on it....

and it sound like u recorded tha hook like on at two different times.... like u did the pitch shift part first then the other part I would say if so do um at the same time so the flow a be a lil better.... or it may be the echo that make it sound like that.. either way lemme get the raw vocals son and this track goin be sickenin
 
aight if u record again dont record so loud or step away from the mic some cause u got mad distortion in this joint.... also dont compress it or add any effects next time just let me get the raw vocals
 
damn man you murdahed on thsi track, very sick, mix this hsita nd repost it plz def wanna hear it, that beat is butta
 
re-uppin this piece - just to make sure the newest "acapella" is known to be ready 4ya!
 
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