Hiya Gmiller, listening as I type. This is a good forum for posting exactly the questions you asked.
Ok, this is what I'm hearing. A HELL of a lot of bass (compared to the reference CD's I listen to). I think I understand that you want that bass line to set the atmosphere for the song, but even though it occupies a different frequency space I found it hard to get past it.
On top of that I heard some atmosphere that matched the bass line - you did that well, it's very clear what mood you want to convey. But, and this is the bit you won't like - sorry - I couldn't make out what it was about. A few words like "chick", "bitch" and "no more" stood out; I understood that something was wrong, something was dark and had to change. I couldn't tell whether you were being ironic about a male who had to change his behaviour towards women or being abusive about a woman. (The point is that it's not what you think you are conveying that's important in a song, it's what the listener hears)
Maybe some clearing up on the mix would help. There is a lot of atmosphere and clearly talent there, I think your song was intended to make people feel uncomfortable and it works, it's just not quite there yet.
Hope you don't mind me saying all this, and of course you can ignore it, but you did ask
(PS I'm off on holiday for a week in a few hours time so if you want to debate this there may be a delay)