Newbie songs critique please

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In my neverending quest for more abuse, I have posted some of my songs on Soundclick (see address below in my signature). I would appreciate anyone taking the time to give a listen and let me know what you think. Thanks in advance for your time. :)
 
Funny In My Mind....Very upbeat. Not my style, but you have some good sounds. How is everything panned? Sounds pretty much up the center. If that's the case, you might try to pan things a bit different, and see if it opens the sounds up.

Isolation..Very full mix again. Sounds like something you might here while watching the beginning of a documentary or something. Very interesting tune. I like this better than the last. Not that the other one is bad, this just sounds better. More dynamic. The "Feel" to this one is much more open to interpretation. Nice sounds.
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Reading Dog's comments... Did you change the mix of "Funny" since his comments? The reason I ask is because there are some tracks that are obviously panned wide. In fact, the wide panning of some of those key parts seems unnaturally wide - at least on headphones.

Otherwise, some generally nice sounds. An ocasional note or two zings out with some excess high-mids to it.

Nice arrangement of parts.
 
dogman -

Thanks a lot for the input. Sorry, I'm located in Vietnam and it's hard to get any good equipment here. I recorded these songs using only a Casio 600 series keyboard direct into my computer using Creative Audigy soundcard and Cakewalk Pro software. That's it.

TripleM - No, I've haven't changed anything since I first posted the songs. Thanks for your input also. I'm gonna post a couple more tonight.
 
TripleM said:
Reading Dog's comments... Did you change the mix of "Funny" since his comments? The reason I ask is because there are some tracks that are obviously panned wide. In fact, the wide panning of some of those key parts seems unnaturally wide - at least on headphones.
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The panning question was my bad. I should have editted it after the fact, and didn't. I tried too hard to listen to certain aspects, and missed out on some stuff, till after I had posted, and relistened. I think it's the drum parts coming out of my center speaker that threw some of the sounds off. Sorry, my bad... :eek:
 
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