Newbie needs feedback

[rreece]

I am trying to find my comfort zone with making beats or recording. Tell me what you think of my tracks. I only recently bought monitors (DX4's) but most of these tracks were mixed on headphones or a bookshelf stereo. What are my beats missing?

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=282333

 

[rreece]

Currently Using:

E-MU 1212M
MXL 900
ART TubPre
M-Audio Ozone
M-Audio Studiophile DX4
Sony 12" Powered Sub (not Pro Audio)
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Dell Desktop w/ P4 3.8, 2G RAM
Sonar 5 PE
Reason 3.04
Project 5 v2
FL Studio 5

Currently recording in Iraq w/ a homemade vocal booth

 

[bknot1]

Welcome to the HR.com fam...it is always beat to give others in the forum feedback 1st then they will return the luv..

from what I heard(since im at work) I think you need to bring your vocals up a bit and most songs..computer speakers maks it hard to get a full listen..so im sure if you hit up others with feedback they will hit you will all the feedback you want..