New tune...first shot at different style

[dumass]

hey...everyone please check out the band "Still Born"

this is a very different style of music from the bands i usually record, so it's my first shot at this style. not all of their songs are like this, if you're wondering

please let me kno what you think, and what i should do to it!!

thanks

called "ADHD"

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/?aid=3168/singles

 

[M.Brane]

First thing you need to do is get them in tune.

Then get 'em to tighten up. They're pretty loose.

The mix is not bad, but that drum sound is too "roomy" for this style of music. They need to be more up front. The bass could also use some more bottom end.

 

[ignition]

I agree with M.Brane's comments about the drums and the bass.

The vocals seem a little low to me. They are also pretty monotone. The chorus in particular, when he's saying "hyperactive disorder" over and over. Its begging for some screaming or something. Just sounds like he's not feeling it.

I like the guitar sounds a lot, and the drums sound great too, just maybe not what would be best for this style.

travis